script and script evaluation

Into cosplay script from Shiro28



script evaluation
the script writing was personally one of the hardest things for be to do in this project. though out it i only had a few drafts which where not the right way of writing a script with the feed back i received i managed to improve the script entirely and added few more people into it to give more information ffabout the subject
after reading the final version i can see how the story flows in the script on how it tells people what cosplay is/ what is like to do it and what it means to the people that do it
i added camera shots into it to show the types of angles i plan to use while filming the footage for the documentary. i've tried to keep each location separate from the other locations by writing them in different places all around cambridge. originally i had to people talk separately but I've decided to change that so that they did the talk together since i was planning on filming them on the same day and this adds sense of community into the script and documentary.